damn

What the fuck how do you make such good fucking music? omg this is soo fucking awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

great

I think is nice build up with the voice into the main theme, I think its kinda obvius how this song is gonna turn out, if you can maybe pull out a non standard thingie in there it will take all us by surprise.
nice one, kinda an artistic song.
please let me know how this turn out.

funky bass kick

I really love the ambiance in the beginning. It sounds magnificent. Great chord progression, too. I'm not too fond of the the bass kick, though. I think it would sound better if it was a bit more punchy. Put something in closer to the low mid and high mid frequencies to give it that punch.

Also it would be cool if you took the voice over and sliced it up and only put a few parts of the speech in. Just to spice up the beginning, instead of having the entire excerpt flow through the beginning. Maybe put it through a vocoder. It just sounds a bit cheesy to me. That's just my opinion though.

Can't wait to hear the final! Definitely has potential :D

Nice one.

I very much liked the intro and how it built up, it became almost heavenly, the sound anyway. Sounds very ambient and good. Great job.