Nice work Nikowolf. The octave you use with the first synth, is a different octave to the second synth. Making them sound a bit weird. The song is a bit repitive and yeah. The sounds you use are good, just you need to learn to use them a bit better. Keep going, I believe in you! :P
That other guys username is funny. :P
Nice use of tools, but it seemed to random and hectic, perhaps toning it down or picking a higher key? Good none the less.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.