This track has potential but you need some advice!
I really like this track but i think that you need to distribute the sounds, Because i think the sounds are blocking each others, to make it more simple imagine that synths could talk, and you are the "sound engineer" and you are making this track,but some discussion starts between the synths:
Synth 1 : Hey so i am gonna be the main Synth, Right?
Synth 2 : Hell no, I am gonna be the main Synth.
Synth 3 : Well are you both going to shut up , cuz i am the main synth
( so they Just play at the same time and they never stop) That's what is happening in this track you need to distribute the synths Play one at a time and to prevent it from being an "empty" track use some bass and Pads.
I hope you could understand what i mean and i hope you continue working on this track cuz this track has a lot of potential.
Nice track and good luck !!!