I triplets in this piece really make you take notice of the song. Good choice on that. my big criticism is to lose the drumbeat all together. I felt like I was in a sun-soaked tree-filled valley just outside a dance club. I didn't know what to make of that really because it was so conflicting. Also, elaborate on the piece more. Try to build music the way you would a movie or story. Bring it to a climax and then resolution. You'll have a much stronger impact overall. Good job :)
Thanks for comments SquidBonk., i did try it without the drumbeat but it sounded a little empty - i take your point though, a build up would improve it.
That was great!
This is a beautiful piece of music. I can definetly see this being used in a scene of a peaceful ending.
Thanks afliXion, it was something different for me - I am very very happy that you liked it. Peace!
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