i really enjoy the sound
your style is really cool, but there are some parts of the song you cant even hear cus its peaking. the change at 1:20 is really sick. and theres just enough change throughout the song. you might want to add some other insturments, and add some crazy cymbal work during the breakdown area.
I like the sound, its original, and for that i gave you a 4, but you need to work on limiting your master sound output bro because its too loud, even with the speakers I have. But keep up the good work.