This isn't that bad...
If you made up that melody line, then congrats. In my opinion, the drum beat didn't fit the rest of the song. I don't know what the constraints of FL are, but maybe they are holding back your creative energy. If you find yourself making up melodies and forming songs in your head, I would recommend that you get the full version to unleash your "creative beast". If you have a friend who owns it, maybe you could go to their house and try out the full thing.
BTW, I just finished my first song that I made with reason 4 (just upgraded from GarageBand) and I would like to hear what you think of it and if you have any suggestions on how to improve it. It is called "Symphony of Dance"
the demo version is nothing because you always want to rush your songs and cant save to edit it later,.... this is good. um since you have a demo i am guessing you dont have much experience.
if you really want this. it really isnt a bad choice. i love all those there are SO many ways to tweak with sound with envelopes...
the song was okay, but it can be better... whatever...
Thanks for the review :P
You're right, I don't exactly have much experience using FL, and the limits to the demo version make it even worse for me.
Anyway, I'm glad about your review, gives me more to think about.