LIEK OMG LEEF PX9 ALONEZ HER MUSIKS R TEH AWSUM
anyways. how would you make a song?
i think the bass/drums make the beat and the electric piano tunes make the melody. did u want it the otherway around?
i love paragons music :3
PS: you said HIS but she is a girl..
agreed with thief1337.
You're certainly not bad, PX9, but honestly, I don't see what all the hype's about. And it's probably useless for me to leave this review because I'm probably going to get flamed by all of your little fanboys (like asiangamer1029). Now I know it's DnB, and I love DnB, but jeez, it is repetitive. I was expecting something a little different after the relaxing part. Not that you have to do what I want. I don't care. I just think it would make the song better. Also, I think the bass could definitely be fatter, and the drums more clear. The bass is barely there for me, and I have good bass on my speakers. The bass sounds like it's glitchy... and if it is, that's not entirely a problem, but it's kind of annoying. The bass pattern could also use some changing up occasionally. It's almost the same throughout the whole song... I only hear two different bass patterns. I think all it needs is more sub, more diversity, and a bit more growliness. I know it's not supposed to be hardcore DnB, but mixing the two (melodic & darkstep) is great. So you should make the bass reesier. (lol i invented a word.) Now on to the drums. A complaint I've been having rather often lately. The snare sounds too high to me. It's got a very good hit, and I can certainly tell that it's a good snare, but some lower frequencies would make it even better. It just needs to be middier. (lol i invented another word.) The kick is good. The hihats could flow more, but that's not a problem. Overall, the melodies and stuff are good, but work on the drums and the bass a bit. Just a bit; I don't ask for much. This could be better.
Older songs like Defection were better, in my opinion. That song has hot drums and a hot bass. More like that would be great.
lol i can see it now, the next review: "LIEK OMG LEEF PX9 ALONEZ HIS MUSIKS R TEH AWSUM"
Thief, this song is similar to Chaoz Fantasy as well as many other ParagonX9 songs in a "conceptual" sense (I think you meant to say song structure). Seems to me that your beef is actually with the particular melodies used. You should realize that drum and bass is a very stagnant genre and virtually the only way to express rhythmic originality is through tricking the listener.
More importantly, I think the mood of this song has you confused- the ending was appropriate because it further lent an airy/light tone, JUST LIKE THAT SECTION FROM 1:51 to 2:40. Then you go to say you wanted a "catchy, amazing, spicy" ending.
I don't understand what you're complaining about. There is no reason for you to rate this poorly, as the synths, song structure, transition choices, and style in general are almost identical to ParagonX9's other songs in this vein.
thief1337 is an idiot
paragon you could make all your songs sound the same and they still are better then 99% of any other newgrounders songs. your transitions are fine. good song. keep it up. way better songs then i could ever make. much love
While the intro is indeed very similar to CF, I think this song is still very different, and I really love it.
For some reason, this song gives me and urge to play an old-school megaman, or maybe a power ranger games, like the one on the Snes...
Theres is a huge influence of old videogame in here, as well as in your other work, and it's great!
Keep the good beat comin'!
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