Not bad at all m8 :) Melody is actually pretty good.
Only bad thing i can really say about this is that you are using standard samples from FLS. Except for that it's really good :) props to you! :D
Peace out ~ [W]
(PS: You have just gained a fan! XD)
Standard samples? I don't know what you mean. Oh, wait, the drum samples, right? Yeah, I need to get some more. I'll get round to it one of these days. Yay, fans!