Here is your R4R. This is a bit different. You should make the hard beat the most prominant when making trance music. umm. you should have it playing through most of the song. your synths were a bit simple. i just didnt really feel life in them. This is a piece in progress its OK right now but it could get a lot better. it was also a bit repetive. and that click is a bit anoying. soz.
P.S. - I gave a 8/10 for effort and a 4/5.