I like the sliding synth you use, that is cool. Apart from that, this song does not have much to offer. I guess used in the scenario you described it might be ok, but it still sounds empty... maybe would benefit from some mellow bass and background pads. Also the drums are very simple which is not a bad thing, only in this case they tend to get rather repetitive. Still, this is not bad-oh, and a tip, don't vote 5 on your own music, or at least, wait until someone else has voted on it.
yeah, im still learning how to use fl studio...this is more or less the first time im actually hand-making the stuff, so it is kinda lame...but oh well.
by the way, about your tip, just a question....how come?