i dont get it
what did timmy do to the turtle??thats whats missing point.Try to have timmy say he is sending the turtle's head to the water disposabl killing the poor the. ya know?
omg YOUffr BROTHer im so horny
I agree, the accent totally dissapears after Timmy is given the turtle, really a down side. Plus you didn't really end it with a joke or punchline or anything similar. This sounded more like a voice reel, kind of like a resumé for a voice actor. Really not that interesting to listen to.
As most of it was good, especially the last part was really not believable, It sounded more like a joke between two people or something only you invision in your head. Kind of like when you're telling a really complicated story but don't have any pictures. It's unclear and after a while no one is going to want to follow it anymore.
coulda been a bit better
It was funny at the beginning. all though you should have had the older brother come back and finding a turtle up his ass and been like wtf. hehe.. idk.. could be a part of a series. :D
Although, the main character's accent virtually disappears after he gives Timmy the turtle.
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