OH DEAR, oh dear..Erm, this is just so ear piercing, though I have to admit first time im hearing this and mine is a similar remix in some part,(Sorry if mine seems a little copied, but I've just remixed mine the way I HEAR it), try again and this time, use only 1 synth, gates and pads are nice too. Nice try but hard luck :(
1 star for trying.
Its so like the last guy said.
it sounds so cluttered. Just a bunch of loud synths good try though.
I will give you this though.
I've never heard so many synths playing at once lol
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