Pretty calming tune. The strong synths and guitar pads work well. I was hoping for more of a progress to a melody but nothing really happened.
At 2:23 you brought in a slight high pad chord and I was thinking that you would bring in a harder synth with a more complex progressed melody. I guess this needs more work. It's a good melody you have it, just needs more detail on the structure.
Keep it up!
ya, it still needs alot of work.
thanx for the tips and feedback
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.