Not to say you ripped it off, but it reminded me of what Davy Jones played on his organ in PotC 2 (Pirates of the Carribean). Regardless great loop!!!
you can do better
I love the rhythm of the song so for what it is, I give it a 9 overall. I would seriously consider finding some good beats on Audio Portal and mix this like crazy for about 3 minutes. I can think of so many good loops that would go great with this song. I look forward to what you do with it in the future.
Seems really good! I think it could be background music for a sad part. It'd be better if you added onto the tune instead of just repeating it though.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.