You could really benefit from drums on this song. They would really help add an extra umph I think this song needs. Your quality is a little rough, and you may need to look into some noise reduction software to take out that really loud fuzz sound in the background.
The guitar work is very good, but back to recording, you tend to clip a lot, which is not entirely pleasing to the ears. The vocals are okay, and I personally think they fit really well with the style you were going for. I really dig the style, and I like what you are aiming at.
Overall, I think you just have some production problems, but nothing too major. This is a great track. Keep it up!
i like it! i don't know if its really grunge, but i also miss an alternative-section here. the first note of the solo-part was completely out auf pitch, but who cares^^
singig could be louder, as you said. but cool, there doesn't seem to be many nw submissions on NG that are played with real instruments and no syntheziser XD
Yeah Thanks, warned you bout the solo but anyway i want more submissions on newgrounds played will real instruments and thats basically my aim here, to posts songs made with real instruments and hopefully to inspire others to learn or at least apreciate the time and effort musicians put into their work, such as ourselves. BTW i like some of your songs keep it up.
I love it, 9/10, 4.5/5, whatever you call it, its yours.
I mark off that small bit because the voice quality was a bit quiet in some parts, still a great song.
Wow Thanks for the review, Personally i do think maybe the singing too could have been louder in places. We might redo this one depends if i can be bothered :p Think we will when Ryans elec. fixed.
hell yeah me too
untill i heard this song and gained a will to live i was a hopless drug addict and like jesus you saved me so you get a 10 and a five
Glad to see you survived the Squeal anyway thanks for the vote, i lost a friend from drugs, he died before we were born when we were recording our first album in the womb which would have reached number one but noone could hear it :p
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.