Well I dont listen to many chiptunes at all
...but this sounded pretty wonderful to my ears. I can't imagine how you people do this, I probably would fail miserably at any attempt of chip tunes.
Anyways, I really enjoyed when the melody developed and the melodic transitions that you use are very pleasant to the ear and fit the song quite nicely.
The only thing bothering me about the song is the DEFAULT HELL hapenning in the crash and claps. I can hear that you've changed them slightly, but if you're gonna use a crash so many times let it be some nice sample and not the disgusting FL Studio samples.
Other than that I really don't have any complaints at all!
Excellent job! Keep doing what you're doing!
PS Review my latest?
thank you for your words! and you are right on that, some alterning would do the trick! and yes i will review it. please check out my other songs!
have a good one