got damn
yous da shit homie....i love the shit u write.
My first solo of 2009, I hope you like it. :)
Gram on the beat! MAJOR PROPS. You can find the beat here > http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/244864
Couldn't have done this without Dex, my Sis, my friends, and every single fan. Please rate and leave feedback. This is only the beginning, thanks for your support!
*The Chorus*
where did I go
I lost control
I just want to know
where did my home go
where did it go
what is this place
I've lost my way
What is your name?
it's so nice to meet you
my name is hip hop
*The Verse*
Stuck between the pixels in digital
beat hit me so hard it's criminal
got me hot, so beautiful
like jerk'n off to a centerfold
shit has mad flow
had to give a ten bro
rapping with the old sound
tracking over new grounds
move now, get up
the whole town lit up
We won't let up
cuz we know your fed up
with that same old stereotype
I'll carry this mic to my berrial site
it's scary at night
it's why I'm married to the light
for the various types
listening to my poems
hiphop with some heart, we'll show em!
you with me gram?
and dex and the all the fans
we got bobb'n your heads?
when we bless these tracks
I'm not the best in fact
but the rest fall flat
when keeping truth intact
let me light this match
I do have cash but I don't pull gats
I aint from the slums but I've lived in one
might be cool to you but a nerd to some
no guardians to help me through
if you turn see me with it
I'm the one that earned it dude
the reason why I'm telling you
you can do this too
these dreams I persue
I have nothing to prove
but to myself
just here to give some help
hope it's something you felt
got damn
yous da shit homie....i love the shit u write.
Thanks man!
I just saw the pm now
This is some tight shit yo! Keep it up!
Thanks for notifying me ! :)
Lol, that was months ago I'm pretty sure. Thanks!!!
SHIT HAS MAD FLOW
Your flow was on point but some of the rhymes were too simple for my taste. The lyrics were sincere, I'm a big fan of that. You have a great voice for rap and I hope to hear more.
I used to go all crazy with the words, but unfortunately no one can follow it. So I try to find a balance somewhere inbetween. Will never make everyone happy heh. Thanks for the words man. I'll keep on releasing on my account and make sure to check Dex's (Hellzguardian) profile too.
Nice Flow
Excellent flow, i'd have to agree with others about the chorus, but i love some your rhymes, and i completely agree that hip-hop is poetry, a lot of people don't seem to understand that. Oh well, you certainly do. and the "steriotype/burial site" rhyme is worthy of an 8 all by itself, haha. Anyway, Absolutely wanna hear some more from you, keep rippin up the mic.
Thank ya sir. Waited a long time to unleash that rhyme haha.
fuckin hater
ur music is good, but i know u be down votin people so u can be on the top, people on ng arent stupid we can tell
Um...no I don't. Sorry bud. The people have spoken, my account isn't even high enough level to game the system like that.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.