This piece has an interesting composition. Unfortunately, I'm not the biggest fan of it, but it IS well put together. A suggeston- if you're using FL Studio- try to get Real Guitar or some program similar...a lot of people dislike fake sounding guitars and whatnot.
For your first song- not bad...but it could definitely use some work. If you ever need any feedback in the future, get at me!
It wasn't my first song, just my first dance song. I wasn't using a real or fake guitar, it's a basic synth but I see where your coming from. This is my most popular song this year which I'm upset about because my other songs I put more effort it sound so much better and wish I get more reviews/ratings/downloads. I would love some more feedback if you get the chance because I crave critisism.
Peace and God Bless.
I liked the mood and the melody, all you need is some bass in it.
It's not bad
It has potential, but I didn't really feel the song until about halfway through.