I like the deep emotional feel. Cool rhythm going on with it too. I think what's the problem is that constant "buzz" in the background. I think it's just too monotone. Maybe switching up the tone for that would have made it better. But this turned out to be a well track. I like the bell-type noise you have. And definitely the middle finger to all the zero-bombers! XD
i tried to switch up the buzz sound but it over powered the song so i just put it as back ground noise. thanks for the review!