This is a really interesting song to listen to. When first hearing it the melody sounded a bit off beat, but then it flows into a natural kind of rhythm, then when the drumroll and new drumbeat comes in, it changes again and sounds even better. Really well crafted intro. At a first listen it sounds a bit jumbled up and all voer the place, but once u listen more carefully everything flows together REALLY REALLY nicely, and there are a lot of interesting sounds working at the same time to give it a really good atmosphere. I don't know if this was intentional or it just seemed to come out that way, but it shows a LOT of creative intuitiveness on your part.
I like the introduction of new sounds half way through the song, it keeps it fresh. What I would have liked to hear was a section that broke the song up into the 2 parts, where it was like a piano solo, with the bass in the background. Then the vocals playing a couple of times then it going "give it up, give it up, give it up, give it, give it, give it, give it, give it, give it, give it, give give give give give give give give give" with a drumroll, then the drumroll stopping and the vocal bit playing one more time, then the beat drops into the second part of the song. I don't know if you know what I mean by this :P it's VERY hard to explain xD
Overall a REALLY interesting song to listen to many times in a row, I really love the way everything flows and melds together so nicely but so uniquely. Great job!
To jump right to what u concluded ! i know what u mean.
hard to say the tippicle build with just the piano part on it`s own, underbuilded with the bass and vocals !!
I did not know exactly how to finish the track in wich direction ! so i took a left turn
halfway i tough mabey to try it like this.
Thnx for advice man ! :D i will keep it in mind.
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