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A Cluttered Cliche

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Just used the 'Poizone' VST demo for the first time, becuase its just the demo sometimes it cuts out to static. However, its just a simple song, fairly upbeat, cliche'd etc... hope you enjoy anyways :) haha. Any Crit welcome and returned.

And any name suggestions please =D

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Not bad...

Your kick is weak but the overall bassline is very nice and so is the melody. I dont really mind you using core sounds becuase some of them are quite good! ish... anyways there is some potential with this song!


chubby-chobby responds:

aha, yeah, if i was better at mixing/mastering i could probably actually make them sound pretty good... one day maybe :)
And i'll have to think more strongly about how i mix the kick next time. Glad you enjoyed it a little :) thanks for taking the tiem to review :)


Fl core samples... Not good.
You need to google vipzone.
You can get great drum samples. Your kick is sooooo quiet...
But, now for the upside!
You did a great job with the piano =D
5'd because if you added fx and better drums this would be amazingliy cool.
8'd because it still needs work =D
Anyway, cya around!

<3 [Dj-S]

chubby-chobby responds:

Yeah i know, i've just got presets, and i hate the FL dance presets so i use one from the 'real drumkit' or something like that. which means mixing it funny :( haha
I'll definately look that up, thanks for the tip :) Aha and massively over-reverbed is the bomb in cheesey dance =D thanks for listening and review, it means a lot to me :) <3

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Jun 4, 2009
3:20 PM EDT
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4.8 MB
2 min 59 sec

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