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Jun 3, 2009 | 8:50 PM EDT
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2.7 MB
2 min 57 sec
3.95 / 5.00

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Rated 3.95 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

My attempt at a strings piece. I used Pizzicato, Tremolo, Violin, Violin, and Cello. I had already finished half this piece. So i updated it and added the ending parts. I like this one. Tell me what you guys think and don't just zero bomb because you want to. Please leave reviews



Rated 5 / 5 stars

I sense improvement.

Yep, I hear more melody this time. This has a good overall cheerful tone to it. The violin isn't annoying like it was on Aery. It was a good use of string instruments. So yeah good job.

lvl5drummer responds:

thank you sir. But if there was a compose-off your ass wouldve been toast. LOL. I like this one. Should I use this one instead of Aeryvin the project? I don't know!



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

much better

The initial theme at the beginning needs work.
at :17 and 1:45, the lead violin just kinda drops out. maybe resolve it? add a C to the end of that.

ending-- eh. it just carries on.
needs to end around 2:19.
with that sounding so much like an ending, its a bit late to introduce a new theme.

Overall, a huge improvement from before-- doesn't sound like random notes thrown together. or give that impression.


lvl5drummer responds:

thabks i realy appreciate it. I know what know what you mean about it being kinda drawn out. I was trying to make it longer and add an extra something. You know what I mean?