u suck really bad incase u were wondering
And get the fuck out!
I think you are very cool karlie!1!
Srsly man fuck eminem you got maaaaad skills. I was thinking could you make a little rap for me cuz u can rhyme so fuckin well N***a! I just luv your works so much man i'd suck your dick!!!
Srsly man fuck eminem u t3h shit !!!!!!
the names karl not karlie
A Squirrel Trying To Rap?...Still Fails.
Not only is the lyrics offbeat with the song, it absolutely makes no sense! Other than that, this rap is seriously hurting my ears, even though I can't even hear most of the lyrics. Please, leave the rapping to better people, like Ludacris, Eminem, DJ Delinquint, even 50 cent for crying out loud. However, there is one good side to this. This astrocious rap, reminds me of the funny movie "Malibu's Most Wanted" maybe you should look at it sometime. It'll remind you of yourself.
you suck, eminem sucks
Why are you so quiet at random times?
In the name of all that is good and holy
1-you're white. White people can't rap and don;t call me racist because I'm probably whiter than you are in terms of skin tone.
2-you're voice is just the most annoying thing I've ever heard. I know annoying, just look at my name, but this takes the cake.
3-you're rhythm for your words and your music were on two separate beats. I suggest you take some kind of music class so that you can learn to at least make the beats match and while your at it learn to set mood music. The music's tone and mood didn't even come close to matching what ever the fuck you were trying to say.
4-Put some emotion into it. Half of your song is monotoned, its all a flat line in the tone of your voice. At the beginning where you tried to shout (or at leasty I think you were trying to shout) "Now get the fuck out!" it sounded like Stephen fucking Hawking.
5-for the love of all that is good and holy and for the sake of all people's sanity just STOP MAKING MUSIC!!! it'll be beneficial to everyone, including yourself, when you do. You're not rapper material, learn to except that fact and you'll live a much better life.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.