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.Unordinary Poet

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I was bored, Was writin an AIM away message, and decided to spit it on dis here old skool beat by Afrojonez
Murdaaj Be the Screen name Enjoy.

i am an unordinary lyric resighting poet
who knows where im goin, in the dark, or where its snowin
im still here flowin, posin... in the the lime light
killin open mic night, then i shine alittle bit too bright

Step into the room and everything turns Dark.
Stand infront of the room and not a single remark.
Pull out ma rhyme book, start readin page after page.
My heart starts to shake on stage, Im not afraid.

It doesnt really matter if im nice or whack.
nothing could bother me more than thinkin about tha past.
I gotta keep lookin ahead and leave the past alone.
Its the cost of goin through the experience and being grown.

If i could turn back the hands of the grandfather clock,
i'd change my actions and i could never ever be stopped.
my life would be completly different and ill know the truth.
The feelin of that thought, i'd be glad to tackle the booth.

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I thought the first line "I am an unordinary lyric reciting poet who know where I'm going" was sick, but the next few lines sounded a bit rushed. The rest was pretty killer though, your voice is perfect for the beat, you've got a Benefit sound going on (which is a good thing, Benefit is awesome!). Yeah man, I like your style.

Yea this is nice,

your voice is good. the flow is good.,
the beat is goooood.
not much 2 say really, sides - I enjoyed it !

keep at it.
Stay Steady

dope

your flow is ill
i got this shit on my ipod
your voice matches beat real well
wish it was longer tho..
good job tho
-Fayde

Murdaa responds:

yeahhh, its a skit on my up comming mixtape.. i was really goin for a nice flow but i didnt want to over do it ;D

Lovin the flow,flowin with love

Lyrics murder the beat
Resurrected it in a zulu ritual
Then had a spot of tea and got married

Murdaa responds:

xD u gave me a nice picture in my head just now. lol thx

Good job, man.

Man, this is great. Can't find stuff like this anymore, man, right? I wish you made it a bit longer, man, that would be awesome. I like the lyrics about regret and the general beat and synth behind; it worked pretty well, man.

Keep it up, bro.

Murdaa responds:

yeah.. i was goin for a real ooold school feel.. like u would hear in freestyle music.. and let it ride with a old school hip hop feel aswell.

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Murdaa
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Score
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Uploaded
Jun 1, 2009
1:50 PM EDT
Genre
Hip Hop - Olskool
File Info
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1.4 MB
1 min 0 sec

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