i love that chord progression you got, the voice is pretty decent too, keep posting!
thanks ..ive trying to work on my singing
i like it... great solo work, amazing lyrics, need some more instuments though, the only reason i give u 9/10 is because i dont like this kind of music but this was good, metals my kind of music :D
thanks, all music is good if it comes from a real place
Not the best I've ever heard, but good lyrics, solid guitar and all together it works. It's just missing a bass and drums, and maybe some strings to harmonize. But 'Don't give up' on your work, it is good, it just needs more instruments and this could be a masterpiece :) Good luck.
thanks ..you dont have any instruments i could borrow do you..haha