This dude is killer!
Fuckin fire ass lyriks, I'm sorry for myself that I havent heard u rapping until this evening. This is sum really good shit, true underground. Keep speakin the truth and the reality that main-stream america seems to hate so much. Closed minded individuals that don't want to face the fact that their ego was never even noted because it was undermined by their lies and false reality.
Im glad you like it all man, I really enjoy reading your reviews. Keep on doin what cha do!!
The intro - awesome. I loved the keyboard.
The lyrics - good, had some great flow, great vibe.
The drums - loved the drums, they were very good, fit the song well
The other instruments - amazing! Every instrument had a place in this song, nothing felt out of place.
The outro - awesome. I liked how it kinda slowed down before it stopped, like in some songs, and it didn't just fade. I hate it when songs just fade, getting quieter until you can't even hear it. This one was perfect.
it would of been a 10/10, but I think the lyrics drowned out everything else, just because they were a little loud, but other than that, amazing! Keep on rapping.
Yeah man, EternalXIII's pristine beat clashes with my obtuse mixing skills, haha. The drowning out comment is duly noted, that's one of the biggest things I need to work on. I'll get it one day, I will! Thanks for the review sir!
You should really make more songs with length like this. 1 minute pisses me off because I like the song and then it is over too quick.
Will do, thanks :)
tight flow bro, all u need is a better setup. clean tho
"Why can't you let me pretend I have some clothes on?" ... Lines like that don't do the rest of the song justice man. You've got a great sound, and your flow is nice, but you need to cut off lines like that.
Beyond that, the only other thing I'm going to say is that you should turn up your mic about 10%
I'm still at the phase with rapping where I see everything as merely practice, so I just kinda let songs flow out and then I'm done with them. Once I've got a better set up and production skills I'll start heavily editing and refining the words I speak. Also, I always turn the mic down because when it's louder I hear it's lack of quality more, haha. Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.