second but on a more gritty sounding synth. maybe double it up with a clone of the same synth and automate some squelchy high pass filtering.
actually it really depends on what sort of track you want to build from this. you could create entirely different songs from either so i guess it's up to you depending on the direction you want to take.
Definetly the second one! Sound WAAAAY more dramatic, wich is better in my opinion
definitely the first one, its got more of a dance tune. Change the hi hat though because its really choppy and it kinda ruins the track. Oh, and you better be putting some killer synths on this!
(PM me when its done so i can hears the finished version!)
I kind of like the first one better
I think you should use the first! The second makes me think of doom for some reason.