Hay this is great but it need to have a little bit more bass in it so it gives it the after effects of the song also if you take out "Is there something wrong offcer" it would be better as well so l am going to give you a 8/10 4/5 still nice work :)
thanks im pretty new at this so im really nervous about this but thanks forthe encouraging words. also i thought all of my songs need something other than just instruments but thanks for the advice
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.