Hmm understood this is one of your first songs.

Its missing alot though, Pay attention to what people said below me other then what Madanimation said. The others have said it pretty much as it is. Its missing real rythem and needs a bit more melody. Before you know it you'll know more about FL studio and be makin hits lol. Till then just keep it up!

Wyldfyre1

wut

sounds like a moose raping a fucking cat

Good and Bad

Hey man (=

Well, it's a bit weird and all over the place - obviously something to just hone your skills at your current music studio ^^

First off, the starting rhythm is pretty cool, but the hats can get annoying and a bit repetitive. The Timbre (or quality of the sound) of the instrument (can't quite figure out what it is) that comes in at 00:06 is kinda annoying, but it does kind of seem to match the percussion.

The effect that comes in briefly at 00:18 (about) is awesome! I really like that, you should have kept that going instead of removing it.

the drop effect at about 40 seconds is pretty cool, but all the effects and stuff after that really need work - it's kinda annoying to be honest :P

Well, overall it's ok just keep working at it and you'll get better! Remember to play around with the effects in the mixer (as I know you use FL studio 8) and remove something if it doesn't sound cool!

Experiment some more, play around!

7/10 3/5

Keep working

To start of you used only one instrument and only one melody. The percussion was lacking rythm and often it seems just like random noices on a row. You used preset effects from simsynth in the wrong way. I believe you should go on the internet and watch some tutorials on basic music theory. Get familiar with chord progressions and drum patterns.
A good way to learn is to listen to other peoples songs and try to create something similar.

And it wasn't mastered.

Overall not a very good track. It seems you still are a rookie at fruityloops and music. As always, for any questions about FL or music contact me.

Greetz Duba

4/10

Not bad, good work

You have done a good job but you were able more connections between a sound and another.