Sounds catchy and evil
Like the other dude said, you need to add some variety i.e. change the bassline or try something different with the pianos at some point, maybe take it up an octave. Adding in another instrument at one point may work. The cymbals at 1:41 chop up the song quiet harshly but if thats what you were aiming for then its ok but it didn't sound right to my ears, maybe ammend them. Start the song without the drum pattern or like have a drum roll into it, or have a piano roll into it, perhaps come in from quieter or something, experiment and see what you can do :)
for sure man ill see what i can do with it thanks a bunch for listening to all my music and reviewing it i appreciate it a lot
The only thing yo..
its the same shit the entire song, throw some variety in there.... start with just the hihat tick tick tick tick tick tick tick and then throw in that snare... let the melody come in track by track... then the kick comes in and murders.
aight fo sho man thanks for the advice n shit ill have to try it out man... but also this song is supposed to have lyrics in it but my friend hasnt written them yet
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