For added experience, I would recommend listening to a smattering of oriental music in order to help you get into the feel of the genre a bit more. Not to knock your work (which I liked), but a twanging instrument with some strings playing fourth-intervals does not entirely an Oriental song make.
The sound quality was good, and the instruments sounded nice as well, so good job on that.
In short, this has the making to be a fantastic piece, so keep working on it!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.