i cant believe you got 3 zeros in a row, thats *uckin re#%rded. i heard way worse then this, this wasnt even to bad actually. especially since you said its for an ad. well good luck on this man, and heres 5 i dont know how much it will help with those 3 zeros though.
Lol, the only people I aim to impress are my clients and they were happy enough with this to pay me. It's all good though, thanks :D