I like what you've done here! You may want to think about switching the instrumentation up a bit. Give the lead role to another sound. That would spice up the piece a bit and allow you to do more with it. Like what you've got here so far though. Thanks for reviewing my piece. :)
Thanks for the review. The lead is actually supposed to be a vocal track instead of synth strings. I'm collaborating with someone online, and she hasn't sent me the track after a few weeks. I'm getting kind of skeptical that it will come.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.