Nice, the only thing is that the part where it loops sounds kind of weird. Maybe put a longer pause.
MAKE FULL SONG!
This loop just oozes potential! And you only have to come up with one other main melody and some pads for a bridge stick it all together and OMG AWESOME SONG!
its really cool
but there obviously isnt much to it. not that its bad, i just cant rly giv u a high score cuz its only like 8 seconds.
its a loop fucker