slight review

While I was listing to this song I can see a few things wrong with it "In my opinion" but let's start off with some pros before I go deeply in the cons.
Pro's
- Stellar precaution!
The drums where not blan at all (only thing I fix is that snare)
- I love the xylophone you got going on in this song
- Wonderful melodies and counter melodies

Con's
- Instrument pick
I find most of your sounds to be more in the high range and to be whiny and annoying for the most part
- You don't have a lot of bass in this song at all, it seems the drum is the only thing you got going on in this (and if you have its deluded from the other synths, (is it a Saw sounding synth?))
- Attitude
Your song may have good melodies but the attitude of the song seems to be low, there's not much of a feeling I get from it. The listener should never have to try to feel the song. The track should come on and over ride the mind of the listener and make it feel them. (Get it?) Attitude is more than good melodies. It's putting them together with complementing sound to brighten or better the mood of the track.

I hope my review helps you out a bit, keep on making music, keep on music and keep adding more styles to the sound of life. Make music your own!