This is a good song ^.^ Helps me feel calm after a long day at school. May I upload this song onto Youtube? It would just be a simple video with a picture and this music playing. I will provide a link from the Youtube video to this page with your consent.
I like the slow progression on this track, but I encountered the first bump at 1:07. It's great until there, but there's something you can do to make the full drums introduction a lot better. The transition at 1:07 is lacking IMO.
You could try doing a very quick and sharp crescendo with a single synth and without drums seconds before you add the drums and you can also add a crash at 1:07, unless you don't want an explosive intro of drums.
You did something similar to the above at 2:48, which is nice. I like the choir that you began using in between those two points.
Overall, it's a very good, subtle track. Love the piano and the pads. Excellent automation job too.
Keep it up.
:) thanks allot.. ill fix that with the 1:07 one. i have a full automation on every singel synth thrugh the whole track so it shouldent be that much of a probleme... i think ill lower the rest of the synths a lil bit and then crash.. and then attack.. and the choir. i have to admit im a bit proud of taht myself xD... its Vocaloid2: Prima so no singer is invloved in this track :P all by me xD.. and ill fix that.. and upload the new one... when ppl are happy ill do a full quality render.. (this is a low quality one)
again. thanks allot for ur review :) let me know if u want updates on pm conserning this track :P
(these problemes are now fixed and i saved in a higher quality this time)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.