Its not that good
but you do have potential. The part after 0:22 needs to come in with full beat which needs to be alot stonger in the fist place (MOAR BASS!!!!). After 1:16 its just a mess of random sounds. And try to be a llitle more creative because i recognize alot of your sounds from garage band.
damnit, i felt that too but didn't realize it. ill work on it thx.