U are working with automation clips now :D, nice step man! keep improving, one day u will be the new paragonx9!
i am the new paragonx9 XD
soundquality needs improvement
While creating a fadeinn you should create other automation clips then volume. You should create others for filters, distortion, reeverb, delays, .. It will make the intro more intense and keep more intrest.
The percussion is too silent. You should add volume or compress it. Try using some presets if you are not familiar with mastering yourself.
If the synths still overpower the percs, add a limiter to the synths. Cut of the midfrequencies.
The kick sample that you used doesn't fit the genre trance. Try to look for a more powerfull one.
The subbass you use doesn't fit the genre. Try looking for a deeper bass. Make the pitch lower. Add bassboost. Do everything to making it flow right under the percussion
You did a good job on the basic 4/4 pattern. You should add more variation and add some more percs. Make it more intense and powerfull.
Overall not a bad attempt but you need to work on it. If you ever update it let me know. I'll be glad to help you out. With any question regarding music, just PM me.
thank you i see what you mean i'm pretty new so thanks for the help :)