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um.. the beat is hot ^^
Author Comments
beat by: Sirhc7000
lmao, this isnt anything I've been working on for long, the other shit will have 2 wait a lil bit more, even tho i didnt rly work on the other shit much either, but still. This was done quick and here r the lyrics
CHORUS
so pass me mine
pass me mine
where is mine
i jus need the time
Who got the time
I dno time... I'm lost
clocks hands hold mine
They draw at the source
I couldn't deal time
Even if it had min bet
plus it's too late
like quater pass nine
couldn't hold its own weight
collapsed on the dime
pulled out like a granade pin
n threw me into a world
Brooklyn, NY: BN
so it spins n swirls
hands jus passin time
so pass me mine
CHORUS
BRIDGE
break ups and break throughs
lighten up n break rules
okay, ight let it run
No worries I'll catch up son
last quarter half time was fun
throw the pass n we won
touch down u feelin it?
strip searches we stealin shit
take names down, dont let go
loaded so backups'low
hold ma hands together
feel ins, time stop forever
take mug shots wit pot
n the love gots hit, robbed
broken heart now money takes its toll
time stops n goes its called self control....
Broken-Needle responds:
dno bout u but im def diggin the whole song, not just the beat
breathe sum lyfe
like iv tould a few other ppl in the rap portal try to put sum emotion into it u know otherwise how will anyone know how u feel about your lyrics
Broken-Needle responds:
very good point sir, forgot about that. Kinda rushed all the tracks i have up, lol.
Anyway thanks 4 the review
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
good shit
Yo bro, I like the entire feel of this one, lyrics are definitely thought provoking, nice flow too and like mickeymao said you nailed the 2nd verse. Stay up man.
Broken-Needle responds:
thanks for the positive feedback man, reviews like this r wut got me here=D glad the lyrics r thought provoking, I try to achieve that in most songs=)
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
Wow
Damn man. I'm really feelin this. Your flow has gotten a LOT better. If you can bang out tracks like this, then you don't need to do disses.
5'd, DL'd, on the iPod
Broken-Needle responds:
check out "happy days" and "I have this song..." too I'ma re-record so they're gna b better quality but I like em=D glad you liked it man
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
PS dissing is fun lmao, im up 4 a battle anytime=)
Ya Ya Bro!
Great work on this one man, as mentioned before; your vocals could be a little louder, but other than that this track is tight, the second verse flows wicked. Keep at man, peace
Broken-Needle responds:
thanks man, glad you liked it. There's more 2 come, lol funny part is i worked on other shit for a bit n jus picked this beat up yesterday at 8 n made 1 of ma fav tracks I've made, lol
Credits & Info
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- 1,809
- Downloads
- 63
- Votes
- 8
- Score
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4.06 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- May 23, 2009
- 10:15 PM EDT
- Genre
- Hip Hop - Modern
- File Info
- Song
- 3.8 MB
- 2 min 7 sec
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