For 5 miniutes...
AND rock...in FL, this is incredibly hard to do. I've struggled making Rock music befote...but you did just fine. SO...great job. 2nd out of 3 songs you told me to listen to.
There could be lots of improvements.
You really should make some fill-ins and fade-outs or bridges or stuff. And it like it's randomized, (first some bass, then instantly, a guitar.) You really should put in effects in to. There really could be some improvements you have to think about.
But hey, nice try. :)
this is random stuff trown out
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