I dig it.

I like the beats and the riffs a lot. It flowed together really well, but I recognized almost every synth and fx you used in flstudio. Other than that, great song!

Good

Ok these types of mixes are my favorite with the screechy sound, but if you put a like bass beat instead of the weird happy one? it would be a lot better. Sorry if I sound stupid I don't really make any music except on garage band and I don't know what everything is called. :P

If the instruments sounded better/higher quality

Then this song would be a smash hit. The melody, beats and arrangements of notes is superb, but the mastering and effects are severely lacking. Also, some parts of the song feel a bit empty, and could use more instruments.

Nevertheless, I give you major props for an interesting and original song.

Cool sounds

I like the way used the Sytrus, sounded like something you would hear underwater, which is good. The only negative thing I have to say is that I didn't feel enough of a percussive beat. Still good, though.

Reverbs and High Pass Filters

You should look into throwing a few more effects on the instruments periodically, I like the overall structure, but you can get a lot more out of an instrument just for a small section by throwing on a high pass filter or some wild reverb on it then taking it away.

If you don't already use it, Reason is sick for this kind of stuff, should check it out. Otherwise, more is usually better, and keep up the good stuff!