well i think its pretty good but it needs an extra kick to it... you can barely hear the bass drum on some parts... but overall it's a pretty good track... chek out my stuff and if possible leave a review
def a work of effort, i do have som tips!! if u want a totally awesome trance line, put those tracks on the same beat as the kick or highhat, it makes it totally rad, somehting u can like totally nod ur head to lol. try to have a bass pad, so ppl dont keep saying its monotone like they alwasy do in mine =P and for newgrounds, submit ur music in trance, it gets better rated, ppl give more 5s than 0s, casue somehow im stilll on here lol. i used a p[ad ion taht song actualy a loop, and redid the midi, i use garageband, cubase SL, FL, Acid, Magix, Cake walk, and like 20 more i foret the names of, everyhting on ng is from garageband, casue i just cant figure out cubase, lol well newayssssss repetative is always good in dance, and deep bass like a real BOOM osund is like totally rad i think, like Dynamic Ds their son Dynamic Power has the best bass ever i was like WOOHOO lol well thres like 2 tips, and i just happend to have a techno music techchear in my school so i was daaaamn lucky, he showed me the program ACID all loops very basic and ez and makes really good stuff really fast.
Harsh review man. But thanks. Not sure it deserved a 3 in diversity or 4 in creativity though. Quite a repeatitive rhythm and bass line you have here. But all the same, it is a good track. This was my first try at a rave type thing, so better should come later on. You use FL right? If so, do you have any ideas for an "instrument" that i could add to complement the melody?
sorry i don't use FL. i use magix music maker and ejay, sorry. but i think you nedd an instrument with more of an airy feel to it. sorry if the review came out harsh, i'm known for being critical of things i like, so the more mean i am the more i like it! i know, i'm crazy! *_*