I agree with you whole heartedly about zero bombers, maybe they should die in a fire >:)
I like the use of a simple progression here, and the vocals aren't that bad either really. I also decided to help you out.
hehe thanks^^ sorry i just hate to get hit by zeros.. and the lyricks maybe sound allright but i bet u cant understand what shes singing in the main part =P
small parts: i wana dance
middle things: aaah aah aaaah (and so on)
main part: we are born to dance and be floating freely. but i cant compute how to make us fly to you...
(yeah i know.. i suck at lyricks =P dosent really bother me they are so hard to understand xD)
thanks for the review and the help to rebuild a just remotly better score :P
i could have deleted and reuploaded it to advoid the zeros.. but i felt like telling them what i think abaut them :P and its kinda whimpy just to reupload..
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.