First ambient track!? Damn! It's awesome.
Judgin by the title I could tell it was going to rock to begin with, haha.
Not much of a critic I'm afraid so I can't offer any useful pointers...but I DO know I enjoyed the crap out of it! Five'd/Fave'd/'N iPod'd.
Thanks a lot! Glad you like it!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.