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Edge of Greyton

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Right right. I had nothing to do today waiting around for a plumber to fix my sink and by fix my sink I mean my shower.

So I decided to have a crack at music, which I enjoyed.

The idea is I was hoping to write a soundtrack to a novel, and this would be the first that's made it past a couple bars. Long story short, it's a mystical forest.

I'll add to this but thought I'd submit for impressions, and advice.



I could hear this in some epic thriller movie, and yeah, it would fit a mystery novel or something. I really like it. :)

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Assassin2 responds:

Thanks, I'm glad you like it. I kinda don't but that's my fault and my problem. Thanks for listening and supporting things.

Sh*t, you're a writer TOO?!?!

Well aren't you just a doll, Assassin2------>
Ah, the "bland" part that guy before me was talking about, could have simply been where your main character was experiencing something simple and innate about that very mystical forest you're playing about.
Maybe like some sort of beast cleaning it's young, a fairy peeking out from behind a tree or even something furry and defenseless getting devoured by its natural prey while its Mother is forced to watch with no defenses, herself.
Who knows.
All of your music SO FAR has evoked SOMEthing or other in me with every play. The ability you have to make music is a blessing. Thanx for utilizing it, Man.
Until next time and I hope that's not very long. . .

..........Take care, be good and keep expressing, Assassin2.period

Assassin2 responds:

Thankyou for another review. You're a machine! Everything I've made has been spur of the moment, but I'm always eager to get something done when time permits. Which won't change anytime soon. Thanks again.

A bit bland in the middle

Could have used a bit more flair in the middle, similar to the trilling you did in the beginning. Substance at both ends, but little to non in between. While the suspense was a good idea, it wasn't that good of an idea to drag it on like that. Hope to hear your next installment.

Assassin2 responds:

Wow somebody reviewed it. Fair enough if you thought it was bland in the middle, though it's kinda half and half; the weird start being one and the piano bit being the 2nd, but I'm guessing you meant the silent part where it dies out before the piano starts. The idea isn't to be one mood of mystery, the second is about the characters inside this 'forest' that I'm basing this off, which is a bit more romantic and solemn.
What I do want to do is go beyond using one string instrument and one piano, and fixing the phrasing and flow. Thanks for reviewing, I'm sure the suspense won't seem so dragged out when this totals closer to 4 minutes or more.

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3.76 / 5.00

May 21, 2009
8:17 AM EDT
File Info
1.8 MB
1 min 19 sec

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