meh

it was a good try. the violin can be a challenge sometimes

ONe error u need to fix

okay.. the beat is good but do not let the Violin/Mybody vocal be off key..

Try to make them ON key.

hm...

I just wrote a huge review and my net errored. So anyways I'll make it short and sweet.

-The song was decent, not great, but ok.
-The vocals were really well done.
-You have two diff basslines. They might interfere with one another at high levels(but maybe not)
-The origional fast bassline is too repititive.
-The song is quite repititive.
-Not a bad job tho.

This makes my review look a lot worse than it was. It's a decent song. But just not up to the par of your newest 3 tracks.

Nice Track

I like this one, has some nice drums and the vocals were pieced together quite nicly. The bass kept moving while the string/accordian/or whater that was relaxed the sences. Nice one man...keep up the work.