More changes, sound and composition

It sounds kind of bleak for the first minute when it follows that progression and has the repetitive melody going. If it had vocals or a sort of lead instrument, it would justify repeating so much. This sounds more like it would belong in the background of a rock song instead of a straight solo piano piece, and doesn't really merit a lot for listening value.

Also, it sounds like you're using Edirol's piano? That can be a beautiful piano sound if you just change up a bunch of velocities. Right now it just sounds like everything's at one level, and when everything is peaking, it reminds me of a Dragonforce song. Also, the ideas in this seem separated from each other, and it makes it kind of sound like a sandbox at the transitions.

I'd delve into jazz and classical if you were really wanting to create really beautiful and unique pieces!

My personal beliefs

I say it's about the creativity and imagination you put into your music. Most Techno and electronic music uses no live played instruments but it's still there and yet it can still strike emotions.

I love minor scales and I enjoyed it. You picked out every single note and writing isn't easy. Good job with this.

Some personal beliefs

Piano VST's should NEVER be used. Piano should always be played live and recorded. How musical is it when all of the notes sound exactly the same? I'll tell you what happens, the piece turns out bland and has absolutely NO emotion. It really doesn't matter how good the melody is, it will ALWAYS lack emotion unless you play it live. This piece is proof of that. Nice melody. Crappy piece. Sorry

Nice

Lol 0bomb :/ that sux dude. The pianoo in the intro, is a little random, and it could use some reverb or something.

I like when the piano builds up, very nice job on that.
The piano is good sir, but make a new version with orch too :D, that would make this piece shine !

Helth
5/5

Keep up the awesome work