Awesome lyrics lol - If I ever need someone to voice/rap one of my songs I'll get you.
My only problem is the longevity. I think there shoulda been a beefier bass and more variety in the background music - though I think it's 80% good but the music is repetitive and on it's own doesn't go anywhere like a conclusion in a story.
that doesn't mean I loved it!
the rhyming was surprisingly well done which I can imagine was soooo hard to do!!
Great song man :)
not even my style and I loved it. That means something... right? ;)