Awesome lyrics lol - If I ever need someone to voice/rap one of my songs I'll get you.
My only problem is the longevity. I think there shoulda been a beefier bass and more variety in the background music - though I think it's 80% good but the music is repetitive and on it's own doesn't go anywhere like a conclusion in a story.
that doesn't mean I loved it!
the rhyming was surprisingly well done which I can imagine was soooo hard to do!!
Great song man :)
not even my style and I loved it. That means something... right? ;)
Thanks! I hear you on the music, sadly I didn't create it so I can't edit it to fit the song I've written for it. It still sounds nice though!
Muchas gracias for the review!
Really nice that you used this great beat for your song. It fits perfect with the vocals.
It's cool that you make rap that actually matters! All the other rap songs you hear is like: "Yo, I shot sum people today and sold 5 pounds of coke". That's just some shit that they spit out cuz they can't figure out something else.
Hope you continue rapping man!
i get it. due i fucking get it.
this almost made me cry. ive fucking been there. ive motherfucking been there. beautiful. motherfucking beautiful. i mean, i quit animation a lil while ago cause i saw where it was going, but i have fucking been there. sad fucking life.
Thank you sir. Thank you very much.
pretty good with all the rhymes
Nice instrumental and good lyrics but the vocals and the flow need a bit of improvement.
Drop a comment on my track(s) if you want.
Thanks man! I will!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.