Nice, but not perfect
The way you start with the piano is promising, but then the distorted guitar totally pushes it to the background, in a rather blunt way. I'd go for the piano part playing a bit longer, clearer, and fading it out less fast.
Apart from that, i'd go see this live.
It sounds like a good boss music.
all of the ideas and riffs are great, but i think the guitar is too loud....in fact way too loud. it totally overthrows the drums.
I like the song and the title but I think it could be hevier and longer.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.