i started playing this song and did something on my comp and didn't realize it was a loop
I think is my only thing I have to say. You've done a pretty good job with this, but extend it past the 16 seconds and I'm sure it'll sound alright. Please don't go off track though, don't try to evolve it into something it isn't, it clearly presents an idea to the ears and to change that idea would cause undue confusion. The simplicity of the tracks works with the ways you've twisted them together, I want to hear more of that.
i didnt even know it was a loop, took me like 4min to figure out i was just listening to the same fucking song. I guess thats not a bad thing, sign of a good loop.
You have alot of potential.
Please continue your music making hobby.
Try out different genres, most of all just experiment.
You'll make some songs that'll suck and some that'll be great.
Just don't stop!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.